Pie Wedgies Can You Critique My Poem Please?
Can you critique my poem please? - pie wedgies
Kay here goes ...
wedgie are my enemies,
remain
what make me feel better
is that you really care
Apples are red
Cakes are awesome
I do not know Knoww .. which ate my possom
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2 comments:
OSSIM lawl, sounds like I write,
Nice! I like the first and the second is rather uncertain. You may add more to the second, which one of these cowards who does not make sense, but make you laugh out loud. :]
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